ganagr1
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« on: January 23, 2012, 10:03:19 PM » |
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Elyssa has been my favorite model to shoot ever since she was a young girl, so when she asked me to photograph her senior graduation picture, I was delighted to do so. After discussing possible locations, she suggested that the shoot take place where she used to be a farm hand. I'm more familiar with painted backdrops, muslin tarps, and other studio backgrounds, but I think this natural, 'farm scene' background really works here (just be careful where you step). Plus, it was much more meaningful to Elyssa. It taught me to sometimes 'go outside the box'.... to do something different.... to experiment with creative backgrounds that can work for a portrait. To quote the text (p. 48), "Don't be afraid to try something unusual; go with what feels right to you and experiment." ~EM
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goldcoastgolfer
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« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2012, 12:03:10 AM » |
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She certainly looks like a pleasure to work with. You've got the lighting outside perfectly set for the shot you took.
The scene itself looks good - it shows the natural farm scene. I think my one comment would be about the black hoses on the machine that she's standing next to. It's a minor point granted but I think I would try a perspective that hides them.
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ganagr1
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« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2012, 12:10:50 PM » |
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Point well-taken.......thanks.
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valerie
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« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2012, 08:19:38 PM » |
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I think the shot is beautiful. Lighting is perfect. Glad to hear Malcolm's comment, though I would have not thought of it. This will make me more careful in the future with compostion. Valerie
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valerie
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« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2012, 08:28:59 PM » |
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Here is my shot with an environmental background. Again my willing grandaughter. We had an outing at a local plantation that has many photogenic backgrounds. We had a grand time even if the photos aren't professional quality. Welcome your views. Valerie
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ganagr1
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« Reply #5 on: February 20, 2012, 09:00:57 PM » |
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Lovely grandaughter!!! I think I would've shot less of the tree (about half the width) and moved in closer on capturing that pretty face. Isn't it great when you have a willing, photogenic model to work with, who is also your grandaughter?
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valerie
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« Reply #6 on: February 21, 2012, 06:33:36 AM » |
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Good point, Thanks so much for your input. It sure helps to see how others see your photos. And yes it is great to have a willing subject. Now all her friends want to pose as well. Valerie
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ganagr1
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« Reply #7 on: February 21, 2012, 04:42:45 PM » |
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Well, that's great.....now you will have the opportunity to practice your skills as a portrait photographer with all those friends wanting to pose for the camera....!
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« Reply #8 on: February 21, 2012, 05:49:55 PM » |
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Yes - you have a very lovely model there Valerie. I agree that the tree is dominating the image and I'd suggest a tighter crop with your granddaughter really filling the frame with a bit less of the tree in the foreground. You've done well with the exposure given the bright background and your granddaughter has a very natural smile - great job 
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« Last Edit: February 21, 2012, 05:51:33 PM by goldcoastgolfer »
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valerie
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« Reply #9 on: February 21, 2012, 06:36:19 PM » |
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Thanks so much for the comments. I will certainly be more aware of the dominant image in my next photos. I do appreciate it. Valerie
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valerie
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« Reply #10 on: February 21, 2012, 07:11:59 PM » |
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If it's allowable I will post the same picture with a tighter crop to see if it is more suitable. I don't know what the rules are on this and certainly don't want to bore anyone. Thanks Valerie
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« Reply #11 on: February 23, 2012, 04:37:17 PM » |
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That's much better. Your subject is now very clearly the main focus of the photo. There's a couple of facial blemishes you might want to consider cloning out in Elements just to finish off the shot 
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« Last Edit: February 23, 2012, 05:01:39 PM by goldcoastgolfer »
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My Blog: http://goldcoastgolfer.blogpsot.com My Photo Galleries: http:/momentsfromalife.zenfolio.com My Facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Moments-From-A-Life/240440369355139
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valerie
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« Reply #12 on: February 23, 2012, 05:05:34 PM » |
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Thanks, That helps. Appreciate the comments and advice. Valerie
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