First assignment

[sbhal]

Hi,
Please give me comment about the attached picture as I am starting to read photographing children so want to get some critic feedback about the work I have already done.

Thanks a lot,
Sanjay

[Evie]

What a beautiful model! I would crop the picture, this thing on the right side is a little distracting for me. Don't do it yet! Wait for advise from people who know what to do I like picture filled with baby, close-ups

[sbhal]

Thanks a lot. I like your suggestion about cropping. Will sure love to hear about others before I do it.

[bar]

Good picture.  I would crop too,especially the thing on the right.

[Sarah]

I would crop too, to eliminate the distraction on the right and some of the blank space above the head.  What an adorable subject!

[peter55pan]

A sweet beautiful girl. You done good job but instead of full picture if you focus on her closeup it would be much much better.

[LittleOne]

Very lovely! I agree with everyone else and think you should crop some off the top and the sides.

[Ginny Felch]

The light here is lovely and what a beautiful child!  Watch out not to center the subject always.  Read more about the direction of light to give more contour.  I can tell you have an eye for color, expression and light!