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Title: Chapter 3 -- Seeing the (Soft Window) Light Post by: ganagr1 on January 02, 2012, 12:42:04 AM I turned my flash off and let the soft window light wash upon Clara's dress, ribbons, and the flowers in her hair.
Title: Re: Chapter 3 -- Seeing the (Soft Window) Light Post by: goldcoastgolfer on January 03, 2012, 12:02:42 AM Nicely done. What do you think about where the shadows have fallen around your daughter?
Title: Re: Chapter 3 -- Seeing the (Soft Window) Light Post by: ganagr1 on January 03, 2012, 04:44:47 PM I would've liked the window light to fall higher on Clara's dress/hair instead of where it did fall. Placement of the subject on my part could have been improved.
Title: Re: Chapter 3 -- Seeing the (Soft Window) Light Post by: goldcoastgolfer on January 03, 2012, 06:16:01 PM I mainly noticed the dark area on the right side of Clara's head which took away some of the detail of the ribbons and flowers. The background could be considered a touch distracting but I like the overall concept of what you're trying to achieve.
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