Photographer's Comment: For the current Self Portrait Assignment. Constructive criticism welcome.

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By EggyEvolt510 (2008-03-29 02:22:58 ): Make that: http://static.pws.xc.advection.net/uis/878402

By EggyEvolt510 (2008-03-29 02:21:26 ): Thanks for the comment Jim. I like your crop. I did soften the focus. I had that up for critique for a while, but moved it to my B&V at: http://photoworkshop.com/public/image/880052_s

By Jim915 (2008-03-29 02:16:30 ): I think this is a strong image. I like your pose and the dramatic lighting. However, the light is just a bit to intense on the left and there is some glare on your nose and the area above your eye is slightly blown out. I'd try to tone the light down. Also, I'd crop the top to give you more impact within the frame.

By steelafan36 (2008-03-24 02:02:12 ): It looks dramatic enough, but over your right eye, I think if there wasn't such a pinpoint spot of light it would be better. Looks like a mirror reflection. Just an opinion.

By johnwillems (2008-03-24 02:00:10 ): Has rated this image

By robertb (2008-03-24 00:18:59 ): Very effective portrait. Lighting is interesting - it centres over your right eye but is not blown out. Gives good catch lights in your eyes. Like it.

By EggyEvolt510 (2008-03-23 23:32:09 ): Thank you. I've been compared to Denis Miller, Sting, Jeff Gordon, & Don Mattingly, but never count Dracula. My Next post for critique will be Dracula looking a bit stern.

By johnwillems (2008-03-23 22:57:38 ): Welcome "Sir Dracula", to the PWS-Family! John.

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