Photographer's Comment: Here's another shot from this weekend, any comments or suggestions are welcome.

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By dawnschubert (2008-03-21 12:58:45 ): Thanks Carl. I agree those areas are distracting, these are things I am going to have to be more aware before snapping-Dawn

By dawnschubert (2008-03-21 12:56:10 ): Thanks Marty. I agree with the suggestions and critiques given about this image but I like it too. Thanks-Dawn

By smokeydawg (2008-03-20 17:49:12 ): Hey Dawn, overall a nice image, just a couple things...some already mentioned, the extreme position of her head is causing those wrinkles in the neck, I don't mind the positioning, but when people do this watch out for the wrinkles, more room in front of her in the frame is another previously mentioned. I also see two little things in the comp that you may want to consider cloning out or just watching for the next time. Underneath her chin and just above her forehead are some bg elements that are a little brighter in color, fence posts or something, but they are a little bit of a distraction.

By MartyFuchs (2008-03-20 12:36:15 ): dawn- althoght i agree with the crowding in the front- i like this shot- i can feel the sun baking on her face and the smell of spring in the air the strap off the shoulder also adds some sexyness to the shot-i might ps the hot spot on her forhead (left side)

By dawnschubert (2008-03-20 00:39:50 ): Thanks John!

By dawnschubert (2008-03-20 00:39:41 ): Hi Alexander! thanks for your comment. I had the same feeling about the composition and the front of her being crowded. It was a quick candid shot between poses I just wish I would have composed it better. Thanks!

By johnwillems (2008-03-19 22:24:00 ): Great composition - lovely & happy mood with the country girl. John.

By Alexander (2008-03-19 21:03:04 ): Nice light, good focus, nice DOF. I feel though that the front of her is too suffocated by the frame. I'd like to see more space in front of her rather than behind her in this one. I also feel like the head tilt is a bit over exaggerated in this one. It just doesn't look normal to me. It also creates some distinct wrinkles in the back of her neck. Very lovely lady and an almost splendid image.

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